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Re: The Prelude
This was really beautiful. The emotions that you portrayed were real and refreshing. It read easily, almost like a sea-birthed poem on a gloomy day. Honestly I can't stop smiling. ...
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Re: The Searchers
Artemis "I think we should go with him, that Jeremy Stork, was it? I feel like fate." I said. Sky nodded her head in agreement and then we both looked ...
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Re: The 'In Your Pants' Game
Do you know what I'm seeing in your pants Folking Around in your pants Take a Bow in your pants Green Gentleman(Things Have Changed for me) in your pants
Jul 3, 2008 -
Re: The Searchers
Artemis Sky seemed sad but she assured me that she was fine. Ready to leave, I got up and then looked over in Fayne's direction. He was quiet the whole ...
Jul 3, 2008 -
Re: The Searchers
Artemis "Yes, its alright with me but..." I started, nodding my head. A silent quietness soaked the air. Sky's heart was dead, which it was from the very beginning, but ...
Jul 3, 2008 -
Re: The Searchers
Artemis Okay this was weird. Usually after I apologized, people still sent me packing but... I willingly took the seat, happy that I wasn't going anywhere soon. Sky seemed irritated ...
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Re: Forbidden Violets
mikedb1492: Thanks for finding those mistakes because I don't think I would have found them. You really think it flows well? Why thank you, I was thinking that it was ...
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Re: Forbidden Violets
mikedb1492: Thanks for finding those mistakes because I don't think I would have found them. You really think it flows well? Why thank you, I was thinking that it was ...
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Re: The Searchers
Artemis Fayne stood up from his chair rather abruptly, an expression I couldn't read spread across his face. He knew that I could read his mind but he seemed irritated. ...
Jul 3, 2008 -
Re: The Searchers
Artemis I stared kindly at Fayne, and Sky, the girl who seemed to be filled with anger for some reason. I smiled softly to show that I wasn't incoherent. "Well, ...
Jul 3, 2008 -
Re: Out of Focus [Edited 8/29/08]
OMG!! I'm crying. This was so beautiful and the way you've written this kept me hooked to the end. I felt that you captured behind the picture very well. Some ...
Jul 2, 2008 -
Re: Forbidden Violets
Forbidden Violets By Angel of Death Preface Would you fight to save someone you loved, even if they were invincible? I ask this question now, as I run lightning fast ...
Jul 2, 2008 -
Re: The Searchers
Artemis The tap on the shoulder made me jump but when I heard the voice inside his head, I smiled. He was helping me, which usually I wouldn't like but ...
Jul 2, 2008 -
Re: The Searchers
Artemis Two figures appeared in my view. One was a man and the other was a woman. The girl seemed to be unsure of herself. What she innocently blurted out ...
Jul 2, 2008 -
Re: The Searchers
Artemis A man's voice surged through my mind. It was lined with beer just like countless others in the room. Luckily, something touched my knee and it appeared to be ...
Jul 1, 2008
